Blops sniper montage yay or nay?

[xl3aws]

i recently produced my first ever Black Ops sniping montage, and i was looking for some feedback (which i so desperately need if i want to make it big on youtube)

plz tell me what you think? what to change?
thanks guys

 

[Funky Jammer]

The link doesn't work.

 

[Carlos]

It works for me, and I say the montage's very good for a first try. Rather good.

 

[xl3aws]

carlos sorry about the other post, used the wrong link willl repost with the correct link